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Post by nemesis on Jun 14, 2016 7:55:25 GMT
so, NEMESIS! real name max fischer, 29, mechanical engineer working for oricon in their cybernetics development division by day, villainous psychic heartbreaker by night. don't be fooled by his b-rank, he's not about to start threatening nations: he's more about small-time theft and extortion.
FRIENDS: max is a sociable, outgoing kinda guy, and he can get on with pretty much anyone if he tries. he's bright, he's moderately witty, never dull. he's also never going to say no to getting completely hammered and doing stupid shit. paint kingsport red 2k16 tbh. friends through work or civilian life are great, as are those through hero conflicts: villains are obviously easier, but heroes and vigilantes not privy to his... extrajudicial activities are also great!
ENEMIES: so he's friendly but he's also an arrogant, impulsive, reckless piece of shit so there's that. he is, quite possibly, one of the messiest men alive. driven by very short-term, material desires, he probably comes off as petty and short-sighted to those with more vision: rightly so, he definitely is. he's not likely to cross anyone extremely powerful, but who knows. he may well end up making huge mistakes and finding himself in way too deep.
ROMANCE: max is gay, and possibly the easiest man in kingsport - casual flings are his favourite thing, and he is a sucker for a pretty face. more difficult is being in a relationship with him: he is unfortunately prone to getting into very short tempestuous trysts and then completely dropping out of contact, getting bored, or just fucking it up completely by being an ass. any potential long-term partner would either need the patience of a saint, or a similarly flighty, passionate nature that would result in an on-again off-again relationship that they both keep coming back to.
OTHER: OKAY so some initial ideas that i may make wanted ads for but: essentially, max is not exactly committed to the side of evil, and as it stands his decisions are just a way to provide for his little sisters' educations and live his life the way he feels is freest. so what i think might be interesting is someone that sways him either way: further into villainy, or potentially back to more altruistic pursuits. it wouldn't be a smooth road either way, but it could be cool to have him definitively take a side and start using more of his potential. former vigilante teammates could also be rly fun, especially if they end up on opposite sides of a conflict.
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Former mayor of the people.
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Jun 14, 2016 14:38:00 GMT
Post by Senator on Jun 14, 2016 14:38:00 GMT
Hey baby want to bang (like shoot bang)
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and it's creeping its way through my windows and it's slithering under my door
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Jun 14, 2016 20:43:14 GMT
Post by eldritch on Jun 14, 2016 20:43:14 GMT
eldritch’s hobbies include books, long walks and incidentally fcking up people’s minds. lets do this nemesis.
you texted me some clear ideas earlier so i’ll expand on how i interpret them here! the idea that max’s psionics make him ever so more susceptible emi’s unnatural presence is 1♡♡% supported by me. the superpowered equivalent of an allergy. max’s auto-immune system i.e. psionic shields going mental over the guy opposite him on the crowded subway who is leafing through a dog-eared copy of the notebook.
tbqh, i am not entirely sure max’s powers wouldn’t work on emi. i guess he’s the sort of guy who has to have inverted commas around ‘human’ as he somehow hosts a little morsel of an unimaginable elder god as his eye. what is emi. is he a person? is he cxaxukluth’s secret lovechild? find out on next week’s episode of jerry springer. whatever it is, perhaps max’s powers don’t work that well or not in the appropriate manner, but i’m game for an abnormal reaction getting max’s attention. cue the potential, and in my mind surprisingly awkward, confrontation.
but lbr, a man with max’s stubbornness and complete incomprehension of long-term planning gives me a lot of potential with emi. just ignore that bad feeling, max. push through it. obviously, max has his cunning and deceit which would be an interesting match against emi’s preternatural wiles. emi likes psionics. he just also likes his official position as Totally Normal Civilian.
i’d be up for threading the set-up you described but you probably have more ideas to add to this. up for starting too! just hit me back olly, tell me what works and what doesn’t. these two can get along, i’m sure, it just comes with Consequences™.
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Post by VALKYRIE on Jun 15, 2016 0:24:09 GMT
SCREAMS AND SCREAMS AND SCREAMS I LOVE HIM!!!!!!! I LOVE HIM!!!!!!
i'm throwing all my babies at you.
VALKYRIE is also a TP powerhouse but she's blocked her own powers and while she is a Hero For Justice and looks down on villains if she ever got wind that he was doing what he does for the sake of his lil sis, at least partly, she would immediately puppy-dog eyes him and be like but the system can help if you just let it and try to be his altruistic force for good, to whatever level of success you desire. also bc i enjoy dual identity shenanigans, i want something where she hangs out w/ max while he's w/ oricon and then fights him at night in the streets.
aegis aegis!! aegis and this dude!! HE HAS HIS NAME EVEN THOUGH AEGIS DOESN'T KNOW EZRA WAS/IS HIS NAME. i just want them to be friends somehow once aegis breaks away from spectre and goes full vigilante. also i'm looking for a plot where after he gets away aegis finds someone he trusts enough to fuck around with his head to try and get his memories back, so maybe max could be that person?
leto my gay son meet ur gay son. mine is happily married but i want them + his npc husband to go out and have a blast. his husband is a high powered corporate lawyer, so its possible he works for/with oricon and knows max as max through that and then they run into each other on the streets at night and get up 2 hijinks while never knowing this is the same guy they went clubbing w/. can u tell i love dual identities getting in the way of stuff bc i do, i do.
also if max works at oricon you should hit up physis
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Post by nemesis on Jun 15, 2016 8:18:27 GMT
eldritch does he like pink coladas and getting caught in the rain
i love it tbh, the subway thing: max getting this GIGANTIC MIGRAINE when the weird dude sits down opposite and he's probably not allergic to nicholas sparks so...
BUT THAT COULD BE MORE INTERESTING TBH? like. managing to get in, seeing something he probably shouldn't n then lil god fragment intervening like DO NOT. cue max getting thrown our and the subsequent nosebleed ruining his work shirt. probably v awkward and i love it
BASICALL YEAH I love the idea and i especially like the idea of the kinda. quiet sinister influence both via the cult n freemasons. i feel like we should kinda start threading n see how it works w them before we start plotting anything further but im excited about the possibilities!
VALKYRIE yo deads ily AND I LOVE YR IDEAS ok so i too love dual identity shenanigans and thalia is a babe! i love her inner conflict w her psi powers compared to the way max embraces and constantly refines his powers, and the contrast between her constant use without thought of her power and max's extremely fine control. SGOOD. and she is so lovely, he would be kinda powerless to ignore her. whether she would be that successful, nobody can say just yet :'D id love to thread them! given her impenetrable mental defences he would be essentially powerless against her so what i'd suggest is that they meet as civilians first, then as capes: that would set up a chance for him to escape and then for her to be trying to convince him to give up the life of crime???
aegis YES GOOD. max's talent really lies in his excellent control and delicate touch with his powers, so he would definitely be able to dig into blocked/fragmented memories and try to piece them together. what i'd maybe suggest is that when aegis makes his escape from spectre max could find and maybe shelter him for a lil while? he is the biggest sucker for ppl in need as much as he tries not 2 be
LASTLY leto MORE DUAL IDENTITIES YEEEEE no but i love this just like. genuine friends thru leto's hubby and then ending up having 2 clash I AM IN A BIT OF A RUSH BUT EVERYTHING U SAID IS GREAT OK. LETS GOOOOO
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Post by VALKYRIE on Jun 15, 2016 8:26:55 GMT
nemesis it seems like the ones we can get started on are leto + thalia bc aegis needs to wait until he gets away, which will be when fidelia/elissa gets active again, so let me know which, if any, of those you want me to start and i'll get on it :>
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Jun 15, 2016 16:14:01 GMT
Post by nemesis on Jun 15, 2016 16:14:01 GMT
VALKYRIE im actually rly excited about the thalia stuff so maybe that first!!! ty 4 start u da bes
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and it's creeping its way through my windows and it's slithering under my door
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Jun 15, 2016 16:37:44 GMT
Post by eldritch on Jun 15, 2016 16:37:44 GMT
nemesis : ... YEAH ACTUALLY HE DOES. i'm liking the set-up as we've got it! maybe the sort of thing max shouldn't have seen is very privy so gives emi more reason to stay in contact with him + keep an eye on him, you get me? can't exactly decide what it would be but i have a fairly convincing way of not expanding on whatever it was if we want to figure that out @ a later date. let's thread! now i'm back from hospital stuff i've got other posts to do but if you're willing to wait for me to finish i can start it? or you can go ahead. whatever works!
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Jun 15, 2016 16:42:17 GMT
Post by nemesis on Jun 15, 2016 16:42:17 GMT
eldritch DAS A GOOD IDEA MY FRIEND. u r def the brains of this operation atm. i don't have much more 2 add other than hype so. I AM NOT EXACTLY UP 2 MUCH ATM I CAN ABSOLUTELY START n then u can get to it @ yr leisure
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Jun 15, 2016 17:04:13 GMT
Post by physis on Jun 15, 2016 17:04:13 GMT
hi i'm bad at plot pages but here i go
physis' civilian persona is the extremely fashionable trophy wife of oricon's ceo. re: THEY PROBABLY MEET AT COMPANY EVENTS? she's the company darling who handles a lot of their pr ribbon cutting stuff since the actual ceo is either going to charm you into signing away everything you own or a genius nutcase who needs to leave for everyone's continued health. sophia's civilian identity is based entirely on smoothing over his messes, in case max accidentally got on his bad side. she's also bffs w/ leto if ya'll get anywhere w that
DURING THE NIGHT she's a vigilante who will go through any lengths to beat up bad guys who hurt other people. i don't think physis would consider nemesis to be a bad guy, so long as he doesn't threaten regular folks who are just trying to live lives. if he does then she's absolutely going to give him an ass kicking
i also have monkey , a grade-a asshole who loves to piss in the face of the gods and make trouble for dumb insults. he's not into mind control, but goading other people into doing stupid shit with their lives. if you want to push max off the "decent young man" edge, monkey is your guy.
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Jun 15, 2016 17:32:09 GMT
Post by nemesis on Jun 15, 2016 17:32:09 GMT
YOOO physis , SUP BOSSWIFE
YEAH sophia is rad! max is not particularly important, he's probably got a fairly secure position in a product design team that don't do particularly sexy work, but he shows up to the parties and quietly instigates the drama at the canapé table. polite enough, especially to the boss' wife, but he has a fairly wicked sense of humour and he's also a fairly unconventional soul. not sure how she'd feel about him given that, but who knows.
GIVEN THEIR SEKRET IDENTITIES THO. I agree that they probably wouldn't clash, max's villainy doesn't intersect w her activity, BUT i kinda have an idea? max is kind of a sucker for helping out people in dire need should he happen to know/take an interest in them, so the idea of them having a kind of weird uneasy partnership over a missing persons case? nemesis helping to forcibly haul locations out of traffickers? im thinking probably a girl living in his building, same age as his youngest sister, so idk. wat u think toska tell me
as far as monkey goes i honestly think max'd find the whole monkey kingpin thing thoroughly intimidating but i kinda have an idea ab that too? if he managed to get himself in debt somehow to monkey, having to ask for favours to get out of a tight spot, and then finding himself kind of cornered into helping out that way...?
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Jun 16, 2016 19:29:52 GMT
Post by physis on Jun 16, 2016 19:29:52 GMT
nemesis SORRY IT TOOK ME LIKE FIVE YEARS TO RESPOND but yesssss i agree w/ all of this. i am actually cool with both vigilante work and awkward small talk at a company party? we can take one each, lemme know which one you'd rather start.
+ monkey: ya monkey's been meditating for like a thousand years so any attempt by max to probe his head would probably liquify his brain. plus, he would know when max was lying bc magic powers. tbh he is liable to get max into really humiliating situations just bc it amuses him, but if max ever climbed somewhere into his inner circle, monkey is all about Honor Among Thieves. actually we could use the gazette thing and have max transport the spirit energy drug? the one that spilled over? and monkey is Not Happy and forces max to reclaim it...somehow. y/n?
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Post by nemesis on Jun 17, 2016 5:51:13 GMT
physis i can start the vigilante one? i think thatd work out easiest 4 both of us. i'll start work on it soon! i have a 2hr flight today so i may end up v productive
monkey i kinda love it tbh? like i was thinking he maybe had to fence something mystical n cursed in a hurry and had to come 2 don of the monkey mafia 2 offload it and now its just like. u still owe me maxie. u still owe me big time but yeah i like that idea a lot! LETS DO THAT ALSO
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Post by monkey on Jun 17, 2016 7:10:08 GMT
nemesis I LOVE IT TBH since "mystical" and "cursed" are his two favorite things to see in an artifact. what can i say, he just digs spiritual power and the things that transport it.
actually u know what would be funny? if max got cursed by said object and the only way to get rid of the curse is to use the artifact...which now lies in monkey's hands. which is something that monkey would rly enjoy holding over him ngl
and yes!! i will start our physis civilian thread and tag u whenever
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Jun 17, 2016 15:47:27 GMT
Post by nemesis on Jun 17, 2016 15:47:27 GMT
monkey I LOVE IT. PLS YES. max's suffering is my gain and we should absolutely thread this also. i've posted for physis to start the vigilante thread so i'll get to the other one next!
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